Might I suggest an alternate title? "The Church of Infinite Bureaucracy" Wait, that pretty much sums up most religions, But wait some more, redundancy of concept is a blessing shared by many faiths, so maybe not an entirely meritless alternative title. Bravo. Kicks butt.
Mater Tenebrarum, the ancient Mother of Darkness, standing at the center of an immense ruined cathedral, impossibly tall and skeletal yet regal, her face hidden beneath a black veil, dozens of pale hands emerging from beneath her robes, enormous shadow-wings spreading across the ceiling, three burning ...